Reincarnation

There is no periphery 

in this slate for eternity

Where our children rest and 

old dreams with all their vivacity

the fireplace in your mansion  

gone cold few years back

 could see the sun begging 

some rest in the veil

 were set apart with

all relentless offerings

Time got nothing restored

with all those vicious sufferings

If i could bring you back from prolonged slumber

i would no longer rattle with a frost heart

and obscured thunder

I day dream you are sleeping beside 

i cry tremble stick my head in your chest 

i can no longer survive alone

in this terrine hell

Reincarnate for me 

and heal me make me brave

I lay over those wild lillies 

that blossoms around your grave

Come as my child 

But come back reincarnated

bring me back rejuvenated

and let these ordeals fade

Souls never fade

They just rest

Somewhere in those orphic place

If i could wake you up

you will reincarnate 

in any form..as a stranger

as a husband 

as a son.......

But i will find you in this slate

This life to next......

i

Reviews

[Confuser]

Stopped at sufferings: and oh my I love it; you are a wonderful writer; returning I am thunderstruck. This is a brilliant writing and I loved every single word. You poured your heart into it and oh my an amateur. Wow, I beg to differ; I do believe in reincarnation and now I'm beginning to wonder if you were once a poet....the way you express yourself is amazing. Thank you so, so much. Dale

[Saraswati]

thank you very much for your valuable appreciation..:)

[Confuser]

You're welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

I do believe we will come back. I liked how you use the description. Easy to understand.
Souls never fade
They just rest
Somewhere in those orphic place
"If i could wake you up
you will reincarnate
in any form..as a stranger
as a husband
as a son.......
But i will find you in this slate
This life to next......"
I tell people. Live a good life. Old debts will be paid in the next. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Saraswati]

reincarnation is yet a hypothesis...but all long for one more life :) where we could meet our detached loved ones and also can rectify mistakes which we did in present life..it always has a melancholic dogma ...difficult and unsolved...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. Many unknowns about death final journey.

[K.W.F]

Such a beautiful piece. I could only strive to write as well as you.

[Saraswati]

you can write better than this ..keep trying and reading :)

[null]

This was absolutely amazing. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I think you're very talented. Thank you so much for sharing this.
Jeremy

[Saraswati]

talent is decided by readers..thank you that you read and proved this poetry's worthiness

[ron]

Beautifully written.
It's hard when we loose someone we love.

[Saraswati]

yes it is...one life and so many losses and pending work....:)

[ron]

Hang in there.