Prison Palindrome

a light hearted attempt at the subject of my new contest.... so please if you enjoyed this, write one and enter

Thief
becomes criminal
always lonely
jumpsuits dirty orange
chains wrapped in ankles
greedy still
killer
--Mirror--
Killer
still greedy
ankles in wrapped chains
orange dirty jumpsuits
lonely always
criminal becomes

thief

Reviews

[Perdition]

Cruel, cruel beautiful mirror as poet and thief..lonely in reflection and warm in the guilty fire...prisoner of life...skin..emotion..thought.
Think I'll just go jump out my window now..excuse me .

[The Cougar's Den]

Twisted brilliantly,
word around word,
again, write great!
~~mirror~~
Great write again!
Word around word,
brilliantly twisted.

*sigh* You are the master, and I bow before you! :P

[An owl on the moon]

Brilliant twists of thoughts and words on the imagery of prison and those so trapped, done so well in the form and flow. This is an excellent piece!

[Cool Handless Luke]

Nice. i like the structure - it looks cool. I'm working on one for you.

[DavidRyan]

Definitely creative. Actually like the top on....I should start doing that : writing out a poem and then posting it once I've written it backwards....