Freedom Movement

To live by

             grand flags

Fake teeth

             that spit

                        lies

WHITE IT OUT

Greasy hands

                  jot it down

Yellow buzzing

                        lights

                                perpetual sound

RED TAPE LINES

Slits with

            sharp objects

Dreadlock protest

                          become the

     rejects

PICKETERS DIE

Reviews

[Butterflymom]

WOW, this is a very intense and powerful piece! Great write.

[DavidRyan]

Beautiful. I love the structure of this. It's fun to play with structure and see what kind of things would stress certain words or make them read the way they sound in your head. I hope you had fun writing this, because I had a blast reading it.