Some Things

Here I am, again, Intoxicated,

Hanging off your thin lips

With only my teeth.

Some things, they never change,

You are the universe.

Never ending.

Oh, Universe,

Sleeping on my couch.

Or in my bed.

But mostly,

passed out,

on my bathroom floor.

some things, they never change,

Like most evil spaces,

You are the warmest place to be.

I would pack my bags but,

Broken hymen,

You are my baggage,

And white angel wings.

Some things, they never change

I am your hearse.

You are dying to get in me.

Reviews

[Emily B]

some things never change . . . excellently written

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow i can see why it is your favorite ones you wrote... full of brilliant and powerful lines all the way through... showing the darker side of love and how it is hard to shake even when it is bad for us... the ending knocked me off my feet. This is amazing.

[Flo_writer]

This had a very unique flow. I liked it to the point where i read it twice. I liked all the comparison you placed here as they helped me to feel the passion within.

"Here I am, again, Intoxicated,
Hanging off your thin lips
With only my teeth.
Some things, they never change,
You are the universe."

Well written.

Never ending.

Oh, Universe,

Sleeping on my couch.

[Fairy Tales]

well that was tricky
really cool

[Angel's Lady]

Oh snap! Most poignant and oh so accurate...Great job!

[Crazy Cat Man]

Awwwwwww jajaja i love this. Simply love it. :)

[Clockwork]

I agree, I like where the poem ended. You keep the reader on their feet.

[Poeticpiers]

Unexpected clever twist to this piece of writing excellent