Don't Go Far

Don't Go Far

A Poem by Sorry Infamous


Dearest,
In stained dawn,
I ache for you.
Without guard,
I ache
so much so that the arches of my feet
feel as if they are yearning for you.

Our life,
it wasn't made for the light.
but lately,
I want more,
That ray of sun through the black blinds
burned a hole straight through my chest.
and secretly I cherish it.

Our lust,
We were never here.
but our lives
they bind,
they blind more
each single blurry time.

Dearest,
In familiar dusk,
I love you,
with fences as tall as towers.
I love
so much so that my mouth falls short...

© 2013 Sorry Infamous


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ANM
Really well put together each word flowing one into another.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow! The opening lines gave me chills, very well written.
By the time I finished the last word, I felt this sort of hollow warmth in my chest, if that makes sense.
It felt distantly familiar, I loved it.

Thank you for sharing this :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


incredible words you've put together. This is nothing like I have ever read before. The imagery was intense and strong. Excellent work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Damn how did I miss this posting…. your words speak magnificently about what it feels like to fall in love without a net.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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LJW
That's hot.hot.hot.hot.hot.hot.hot

Posted 10 Years Ago


geez you are intense...i feel this poem from the top of my head, which it pretty darn near blew off, to the tips of my toes...

lust, love more lust and more love that words cannot describe...although you well describe the feeling.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow. Here is some marvelous poetry...Well penned and conveyed...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dearest,
In stained dawn,
I ache for you.
Without guard,

Just may be thee most potent an opening as I've seen, wow. I love that.
(And correct me if I'm wrong but...) this is an excellent expression AND exposure of and to forbidden love at its best!!!
I love when I know I'll be back to read a piece again....and again.

Thanks for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago



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