Haiku To Aurum

This poem is related to a short fiction that I had written. it focus on the boyś feeling towards an eccentric girl named Aurum. This poem can be viewed as a kind of personal letter by the boy.

How to describe her,
This girl named, Aurum Mistress
Where do I begin?
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But let me start now
From the Mistress family
of heads eating snakes
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She is essentric
her obsesions are puppets
She scares me a lot
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 I cannot let go
No matter how much she wants
Maybe I'm crazy

Reviews

[Nusquam Esse]

First of all, these would actually be considered Senryu, not Haiku. Also, you misspelled Obsessions. I am also thinking that the line "She scares me a lot" could be improved. For one, the repeat of she is in poor taste, and I find 'a lot' to be a bland modifier--a real waste when you are working with short poetry structures. Make it cut more, perhaps "Controlling with Fear" since it works with the puppet theme?