Midnight Snow

Midnight Snow

A Story by Atram Dace
"

This is the first one-page short story from a short story collection I am currently writing.

"

Do you know why it doesn`t snow in here?”

Faustina Beck Lopez raised her head. Her hands wrapped around her teacup as she sat in front of a Cafe overlooking a series of dying trees. Opposite her was a boy with a checkered smile. He looked at her and shrugged.

“It`s the sun. It`s too hot for them to come out.”

“What?” He asked barely moving his lips.

“The snow, you silly. When the night was at its coldest, balls of snow emerged from branches of trees. They`re like leaves. At the same time, they`re not. Before dawn, they all drift to the sky. That`s why no one sees them here. Have you?”

His smile stayed the same.

Faustina clasped her hands. “It`s really beautiful. It`s an everyday Christmas with the trees covered in white. Do you want to come tonight?”

The boy fell flat on the table.

“I guess not,” She sipped her tea.

Cardboards don`t make ideal friends.

© 2014 Atram Dace


My Review

Would you like to review this Story?
Login | Register




Reviews

Interesting story. "Cardboards don't make ideal friends." I like that.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

126 Views
1 Review
Added on June 13, 2014
Last Updated on June 13, 2014
Tags: surrealism, fiction, snow, magical realism

Author

Atram Dace
Atram Dace

Wellington, New Zealand



About
I am a 22 year old who possess an active imagination but have difficulty finding a job. I am a lover of the surreal, and the weird living an ordinary life. I speak little but day dream a lot. more..

Writing
Mermaids Mermaids

A Story by Atram Dace