Sweet Treat

Based off of the song "Candyman" by Aqua

My dear boy,

are you begging

for sweet delights?

You know the magic words,

just say I am yours tonight.

Let's visit the Sugar Tree

& you can pick which

treat I shall be--

A tootsie roll?

A lollipop?

A hot fudge sundae

with a cherry on top?

I'll be happy to

be a sweet delight

just for you...

just have to utter

those magic words.

"You are mine tonight."

Like I said...

your wish is my command!

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

There is a sensually naughty yet fun and lighter in tone chemistry in this poem.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a playful, enchanted song that flows through each line. The sweet magic seems so out of reach for many of us, but you make it feel so real... as real as the sweetest delight one can imagine. Love this! 🍨🍨🍨

[Daz]

It's a very tempting poem. Brilliant structure.