Coffee Cups

The medicine provides the curing,

contain liquid dreams of caffeine.

Lighting my soul.

Sweet tastes,

linger & linger.

Walk on water & fly through air.

Feelings of pure rainbows.

For nurturing is crucial at this point.

Following the last drop,

sunshine on a cloudy day.

Sincerely,

A believer

Reviews

[Twilight]

A simple poem, in structure; and rather brief.Even so, as a fellow coffee ☕ lover; I can certainly relate to the subject matter.! But, "feelings of pure rainbows"? That line doesn't work for me. Primarily because, seeing a rainbow is purely visual; so one cannot feel it. However, rainbows are obviously pretty to look upon. I don't mean to be negative with my first review of your work, but believe in keeping honest and open. I understand metaphors well, but nice words which people use in poems don't always work as metaphors; no matter how emotive or nice the words happen to be.