Big Sad

The Big Sad--

each wave is real.

It's no big secret,

but a warning about

the darkness out there.

It was the wreck

we were looking for.

Their flowers sadden us.

Poured unused coffee grounds 

onto the tile floor. 

A few empty Coors

(maybe a sip left inside them).

Snacking on day-old donuts.

Draws the bathwater & cry

cause the bread has all molded.

He says I'm crazy...

I hope I am. 

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

I really like how you write. We actually have the same style I just don't center the text so it looks different.

[Poetic Beauty]

Those moment of depression or even regular hopelessness aren’t easy to deal with. Tiny insignificant things can set off a tidal wave of emotions that are hard to keep under control and they are a force to be reckoned with.

I like how you used something simple like moldy bread and day old doughnuts to get the idea across.