6 am

Read what my friend and I can do at 6 am in the morning, while at school!

In a day, crowded by indifference

ALL HELL BREAKS LOOSE

A beautiful man is lost to darkness

Drowned in the abyss of despair

Yet another soul led to slaughter

Sacrificial lambs in the rainbow pool

Of life, finding no hope in the eyes of their executioner.

Ten thousand lashes to the unwanted soul

Suffering made eternal by man.

Tears of the sorrowful fool

Stain the bosom of the hated maiden.

Trapped in the thorn bushes of eternal sonata

Anguish prospers throughout mankind.

A silent process,

Leads the masses to their ultimate demise.

82 days of wrangling masses under the whip of devil's spawn

Hope dies and despair reigns supreme.

The screams unheard, the kingdom at the peak of infinite destruction.

Author's Note

What do you think honestly?

Reviews

[Legion]

sureme? supreme perhaps

infinate? infinite perhaps

I liked it. Very dark and disturbing. A fitting tribute to the follies of mankind. Well done. You two should work together more often.