An Injunction From God

An Injunction From God

A Poem by Suzanne Deakins
"

all those times we missed it

"

An Injunction from God

 

 

It was like an injunction from God

A command performance of love

And in the end our love was

lost in our story

like water in sand

 

Our story took all of our love

Diluting its very being

And we wept knowing

that we had not known

what we had was love

 

Through  the years we waited

looking in the back of our mind

wanting to know and not asking

waves losing direction upon the shore

 

Music filling us up

Filling our senses through the years

Vanished moments of memory

floating over the ocean

 

Our love was an injunction from God

A command performance

Happening only once

A love never ending

A wanting never fulfilled

 

Lost in our story

obsessed by desire

vacant eyes finding nothing

hot empty sands
only my words to fill the void

 

An injunction from God to love

 

January 5 2008

© Suzanne Deakins

From Double Chocolate, a book of exotic love

 

© 2008 Suzanne Deakins


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This was published? WOW
Congrats to you! I love the title
but tell me
what is an injuction?

Cheers,lea

Posted 16 Years Ago


it seems like there's a lot of love in this poem. and cliches.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Suzanne Deakins
Suzanne Deakins

Portland, OR



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I have been writing most of my life. Published a couple of times...more interested in the creative aspect of poetry, fiction, and story telling. more..

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