The Deeds Shall Shatter

From a story I am working on. Was meant to be both a semi common poem and a little known spell.

The deeds of heroes long past

Shall shatter this day like glass

When evils once slain and forgotten

The creatures so foul and rotten

Shall on darkness eve rise again

Truth revealed, Good can never win

Author's Note

Kill me.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:).....................

[Passingdaze]

And good WILL never win. Excellent write...Very detailed for such a short piece. I liked it. Keep on kickin' it out like this and you'll be doing quite well. I love the author's note by the way.

Nice rhyming, imagery, and flow.
It doesn't seem forced, which is good.

I suck at reviews. Sorry. I like this though.

[H.Y]

like the last part, good can never win. which in my opinion is true, if i believed good is what most people believe it is. (i tend to lean to the everything is relative side, lol who am i kidding i live on that side, i could be like the ambasador.)