THE MEETING

In anticipation of a first meeting

The Meeting

 

This is our first real meeting

Not sure what to say or do

But I want you to feel safe

I’ll take my queue from you

 

I hope you’ll take my hand

When we stroll the path outside

And return my hugs with passion

When my emotions I confide

 

If you care to share your lips

Know that mine are aching too

Though I’ve had them in my dreams

Dreams of kissing you

 

If you favor me with a touch

I’ll return the same in kind

Explore me as you will

My heart I’m sure you’ll find

 

To ask much more is folly

To get more ecstasy

But you know I will be patient

We’ll just wait and see

 

I pray that when you leave here

You are happy that you came

For after this brief meeting

We will never be the same

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

A really good cadence, not over done it fits pace of your content. Your message is laced in hope, a true love poem.

[Roger Turgeon]

It's a bit of a Hallmark greeting but heartfelt non the less. I travelled 3000 miles to see an online woman I adored and was stood up. I read it to her from the airport on my return flight

[Cherrie Palmer]

Well it turned out great. Anyway Hallmark gets their best stuff from poets like us .

[Corset]

beauty of a little curious poem, strangers like ships in the night, what would it be like to be in love with them? would they be kind lovers, tender and sweet, would they be selfish lovers everything about themselves? Never can tell till you jump in and then it's too late or maybe its a Forrest Gump craker box with a prize inside, lol. Only the few and lucky live to tell the tale.

[Roger Turgeon]

The circumstances were that I was stood up and never got to find out ( : O (

[Corset]

oh noes! like two ships in the night.

[Frieda P]

Awh, you're an old softy, so sweet and sentimental. The graphic made me laugh, it does feel alien at best sometimes

[Roger Turgeon]

You too with the "sweet"? Geesh. And quiet on that old softly stuff....you'll ruin the illusion. ( : O )

[Anne Goldmann]

This is very sweet and speaks so much of what we hope for. Thank you for this.

[Roger Turgeon]

Aaaaargh!!! Now the "sweet" word is in play. I'll have to write some new dark poems I guess ( : O )

[Cryingkate]

Awe the fun is gone.. You talked about what your thinking.......:-)

Though the romance was spilled, I find this is very clever CUTE write....

[Roger Turgeon]

OH, NO!!!!! You broke out the dreaded "cute" word.......curses

[Cryingkate]

:-) giggles........

[MsJewel]

Beautifully sweet and romantic. I love the soft flow of this verse.
A stunning love poem!

:) Julie

[Roger Turgeon]

You're such a romantic I knew you would love it. ( : O )

[AYVID N]

This a poem any woman would love. Need I say more. You know what pleases a woman best. Applause on this awesome romantic write!

[Roger Turgeon]

Thank you for the unbelievably kind words. ( : O )