SHARDS OF SHATTERED MINDS

Just counting the pieces

SHARDS OF SHATTERED MINDS

 

Words shall remain unspoken
Of the mind forever broken

 

Like busted glass the pieces scatter

The puzzled ruins no longer matter

 

Each part is but a jagged marker

Of the tormenting circus barker

 

Each slice reveals a broken dream

Unraveled at the mental seam

 

Is there hope among the rubble

Or just endless pain and trouble

 

Lost forever the trust that binds

These shards of shattered minds

Reviews

[Oyindamola Shoola]

i love this poem so much...the rhymes especially...
if only love from this heart could suddenly gather
i think the pieces will heal back together...

[Roger Turgeon]

First of all thanks for reviewing this specific poem...as you can see it doesn't get a lot of attention. It comes from a dark place...since healed ( : O )

[Oyindamola Shoola]

you are welcome...

[Tina Louise UK]

I can relate to this piece hun...great dark piece :) x

[Roger Turgeon]

OK let's keep it that way. No matches, candles or lighters. ( : P )

[Tina Louise UK]

:P .......