SOULMATE

A Sears catalogue of desires in a mate

SOULMATE

 

My SOULMATE is:

The one who shines a light on me, during my darkest days

And always says I love you, in endless special ways

The one who holds me close, till my somber tears subside

And always listens to me, when my feelings I confide

The one who echoes my potential, in reflected eyes

And lets me see the love they have, a love beyond reprise

The one who makes me better, just to have them next to me

And kisses me so gently, yet with passion all can see

The one who always knows, just how I liked to be embraced

And does so without prompting, as our bodies are en-laced

The one who makes sweet love to me, and cuddles with me to sleep

And takes my empty hand in theirs, forever theirs to keep

The one who takes my half a soul, and makes it whole again

And makes us that much stronger, than the parts we both put in

 

Reviews

[Cryingkate]

perfectly written and perfectly said. One tiny itsy suggestion

"and cuddles with me to sleep" There seems to be one beat too many for your perfect poem . Perhaps you might say " And Cuddles When We Sleep"

[Roger Turgeon]

I am a notorious syllable counter, I love the structure.....guess I considered "cuddles" one and not two. I may just chalk it up to poetic license....or a failed education ( : O )

[Cryingkate]

either way tis' Good my friend !

[Adrimira]

Beautifully written. I sensed delicacy, a deep yearn and solid love - pure love. Simply lovely, thank you sharing, Roger.

[Roger Turgeon]

Thank you...I appreciate your comments ( : O )

[Samwam]

You make me smile every time i read your writes. Honestly. Thank you

[Roger Turgeon]

I love to smile ( : O )....glad I was able to make you do the same

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

This is a lovely, romantic and touching piece, perfect for Valentine's Day! Loved it.

[Roger Turgeon]

Hadn't thought of the Valentine's Day connection. Glad you like it. Thanks for the read.

[Ladysue]

when love takes hold, all its qualities are felt and our soul-mate found. A heartfelt write that flowed beautifully..

[Roger Turgeon]

You make a good point....here I start with my "wish" list instead of letting love fill in the verses

[Roger Turgeon]

Thank you....perhaps its too much to expect ( : O (

[Tina Louise UK]

A heartfelt piece, a beautiful list of things to have in a soul mate...worded perfectly, enjoyed :) x