Sanity

Sanity

A Poem by Susie
"

A tribute to that friend that is there for you when you need them.

"

V1.
The door is shaking at the fist of a stronger hand

Familiar demon is back for one last fight

Just to finish off the scene, outside is rain and lightning

The end of something has arrived


Chorus.
Sanity, can I call you after midnight

Tentatively present my desperation

To your advice

It is absurd, it is obscene

But I'll be damned if I can't

Borrow your eyes


V2.

You have the perfect ratio of meaningful words

And the ones I can't remember, but I remember laughing

Crying, laughing, breaking down the walls of fear

They were far too heavy for me anyway


Bridge.

I am consumed by all my childish mistakes

Unresolved aftermath, passionate rage

I am skin and bone, dirty and bare

A maize of damp cheeks, unruly hair

Alone in the cage of the mind

Facing torture of a unique kind

No control over tears or time

Sorry, I am unreasonable

© 2014 Susie


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"I am skin and bone, dirty and bare

A maize of damp cheeks, unruly hair

Alone in the cage of the mind

Facing torture of a unique kind

No control over tears or time"

Wow. I have felt the power of your words...A splendid poem or song...:)..................


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Susie

10 Years Ago

I am glad you can relate with my sometimes out-of-control emotions. I appreciate you reading this. Y.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:).....................



Reviews

"I am skin and bone, dirty and bare

A maize of damp cheeks, unruly hair

Alone in the cage of the mind

Facing torture of a unique kind

No control over tears or time"

Wow. I have felt the power of your words...A splendid poem or song...:)..................


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Susie

10 Years Ago

I am glad you can relate with my sometimes out-of-control emotions. I appreciate you reading this. Y.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:).....................

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Added on January 22, 2014
Last Updated on January 22, 2014
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Susie
Susie

Adelaide, Australia



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