With or Without You

With or Without You

A Poem by Susie
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A song about the flow of a relationship, and conflicting passions.

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She fit the stereotype of a small town girl
You take a bough, you save your dough, you save yourself
She had plans of getting out, seeing the world
But the dream was having a ring on your finger
When he got down she could have it all she figured

If that’s what you get for doing everything right
He must be a hell of a man
If love is a once in a lifetime deal I’d
Better change my plans
Hunnie, this is a pivotal moment in time
I’m going to Canada with you

It seemed to be the only obvious answer
But looking back, she sees how young they were
Ten months on, a hundred lessons learnt
Like when you’re heading for the wall in free flight
God is good and right and all �" and blind

If that’s what you get for doing everything right
He must be a hell of a man
If love is a once in a lifetime deal I’d
Better change my plans
Hunnie, this is a pivotal moment in time

“I’m ending this for good”
“I’ll believe it when I see it”
She warns him that he should
He tells her, “That aint fair”
We run around in circles
Around the elephant
Perimeter feels bigger
Every time
“I’m ending this for good”
“I’ll believe it when I see it”
She warns him that he should
He tells her, “That aint fair”
We run around in circles
Around the elephant
Perimeter feels bigger

If that’s what you get for doing everything right
He must be a hell of a man
If love is a once in a lifetime deal I’d
Better change my plans
Hunnie, this is a pivotal moment in time
I’m going to Canada without you

© 2014 Susie


Author's Note

Susie
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Thank you for reading. I will check out some of your work as well. xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)...................

Posted 10 Years Ago



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