Snapshots

1.     Snapshots

1

My voice

Empty noise.

Your babble

Enchanting music.

We are God’s creation.

2

Only red berries

Don’t make

The earth enchanting.

A sparrow

Also has a home.

It is talking a rest.

3

Gazing at the sea below

A bird flew

Into the sky

Bidding me goodbye

On the temple ramp.

4

My email cribbed.

Laid, Layed

Overload, overlayered

Crash, crushed.

5

Tsunami hits Japan.

God is resting in Heaven.

Emails will be checked later.

6.

The blue bird

Was flying with Emirates.

Emirates sponsor cricket.

India take on England at Lords.

7.

Rising sun

Honking bus

Sleeping baby

Cribbing dad.

That’s mom’s morning.

8.

The river has hung

A boulder in its neck.

It has got stuck in the dam.

Damn the dam.

Bhagiratha doesn’t reach.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the flow of thoughts. You took the reader to many thoughts and places.
"Empty noise.
Your babble
Enchanting music.
We are God’s creation."
The above lines stood out for me. I liked the journey shared in your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Susheel Sharma]

Thank you very much

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.