The perfect precious moment

The moment that makes you feel motionless,

when her hair falls on his face,

and she is grabbed by her waist.

The moment that is precisely priceless,

when there's exchanging of breath,

and settling down of lips.

Reviews

[Caroline B A Maguire]

succinct and very lovely, it paints a picture in my mind that makes me smile:)

[Sushma Chaudhary]

Glad to hear, you could paint a picture :)