Safe Haven - Prologue

Safe Haven - Prologue

A Chapter by Karyn Knight
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Thirteen year old Jennifer Sweet is running away from home and attempts to gain permission to land on the planet Safe Haven.

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Thirteen-year-old Jennifer Sweet stepped off the shuttle, dressed in a simple traveling outfit with a large leather bag slung over her shoulder. She stood still for a moment, her hazel eyes taking in the multitude of people bustling in all different directions. Having lived in a small outpost on Vega Colony, she never imagined there could be this many people all in one place.

 "Hey girl, move it, won't you?" a man demanded, shoving her out of the way. "People need to board, you know."

 "Sorry," Jennifer mumbled. She struggled to make her way through the mill of travelers in the space station, looking for the information desk. She spotted it not too far away and changed direction. Jennifer joined the line of impatient tourists, reviewing in her mind what she was going to say.

 My name is Jenny Sweet. I'm from Vega Colony, and I'd like to apply for citizenship in Safe Haven. My name is Jennifer Sweet. I used to live in Vega Four, but now I'd like to live in Safe Haven. She was so focused on what she would say that she hardly noticed when it was her turn.

 "Excuse me, do you need something?" the lady asked, jolting her out of her thoughts.

 "Sorry! I'm Jenny. I'd like to go to Safe Haven." Blast! She'd messed it up! She sounded like a fool!

 "Where are your parents, Jennifer?"

 "They're dead." Only half-true. "I'd like to apply for citizenship in Safe Haven."

 "I'm sorry, but Safe Haven has very strict rules. They don't even allow visitors unless they have clearance."

 "Then how do I get clearance?"

 "How old are you?" the lady asked.

 "Thirteen."

 "Listen, Jennifer, you can't go to Safe Haven. Now if you'd like to go somewhere else, I can provide you with the information."

 "No. I want to go to Safe Haven. How do I get clearance?" she persisted.

 "I'm sorry. I can't help you. Next!"

The person behind her quickly pushed Jennifer aside and stepped up to the desk. She had no choice but to wander over to a waiting bench. She sighed. She needed to get to Safe Haven. It was the only way she could be safe.

"You Jen?" a voice asked.

 She looked up as an older man in his fifties sat next to her. "Yeah."

 "I couldn't help but overhear your conversation. You want to go to Safe Haven, no?"

Jennifer nodded, still gripping her travel bag.

 "And why would a young lady like you want to go there? There's plenty of other wonderful planets you could go to instead."

 "Yeah, but I want to go to Safe Haven. It's... well... safe."

 "I heard you say your parents are dead," the gentleman said. "Don't you have any relatives to take care of you?"

 There was her grand-père on Earth, but that's probably the first place her father would look. "Not really."

 

                   "Well, there's only three ways to be allowed into Safe Haven. Either you're a Queller or training to be one, or you're an ambassador that's been granted temporary access."

 "A Queller?" Jennifer echoed. "What's a Queller?"

"They're people that have a particular Jenar gene, the ability to erect a mental barrier. With enough training, that barrier is impenetrable by even the strongest Jenar."

Jennifer bristled, remembering the tales her father had told her about the evil, arrogant, prideful Jenar. "Jenar?"

 "Don't worry. Quellers aren't Jenar. They can't read people's minds, or move things with their minds or anything like that. Just the barrier. They're Peluri. Says so in the law."

 "Oh." She felt better. "So could I go to Safe Haven if I train as a Queller?" she asked eagerly.

 "It isn't that simple, Jennifer. You have to have the gene, first, naturally, of course."

 Another "Oh."

 "'Course, it wouldn't hurt to test you for it."

 Her face brightened. "Really?"

"Sure. Just come with me."

 

 

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The older man expertly led Jennifer through the crowd to a small, unnoticeable door marked "Authorized Personnel Only."

Jennifer was surprised when the man whipped out an ID card and swiped it in the card holder. The door swung open and they went inside. A group of technicians sat at their stations, monitoring security cameras spread throughout the space station.

 "This way," the man guided, taking Jennifer to a chair-like device. "Sit down and make yourself comfortable."

 Jennifer obediently sat down, and a mechanical cylinder that was attached to the chair scanned her upper body. The man sat down on a stool next to her, watching the results of the scan on a monitor.

 "What is it?" Jennifer asked.

 "You're in perfect health. And I've isolated the section of the DNA where the appropriate gene should be located. And the good news is... you have the Queller gene."

"I do?"

"Yes."

"Then I can go to Safe Haven, now, right?"

"Not just yet, Jennifer. First, you have to sign a document that states that you are willing to be trained as a Queller, and secondly, you must be accepted by the Board of Elders."

 

"Oh. Well, what do I do now? I want to go to Safe Haven, and if being trained as a Queller is the only way to get there, than that's what I want."

"Your parents aren't dead, are they?" he stated, changing the subject.

Jennifer didn't reply for a moment. "Momma is." How she missed her mother!

"But your father is not."

"No," she admitted. "But I have a good reason for running away."

"Do you?"

 

"I do!" Jennifer declared, feeling insulted. Then immediately, she bit her lip, regretting her outburst. "I'm not going back."

"Why not?"

She didn't want to answer, so she squirmed in her seat. "Can I get up, now?"

He nodded his assent, so Jennifer did.

 

"I want to be a Queller. Show me the document so I can sign it."

"Not until you explain to me why you are running away from your father," the man insisted.

Jennifer sighed. "I don't want to talk about it."

"Then you won't be trained."

"Never mind, then," Jennifer said, turning away, and heading for the door.

"Miss Sweet, if you walk out that door, you won't get a second chance. And I'll call the authorities and have them return you to Vega Four."

"Vega Four!" Jennifer shrieked, turning around. "Vega Four! How'd you know I came from Vega Four?!"

"I saw you disembark from the shuttle train, and inspected your traveler's script."

 

Of course! How foolish of her. Everybody who used the shuttle system had a cybernet traveler's script easily accessible by security. For a moment, she thought he had been reading her mind.

"Well?" the man inquired.

 

Jennifer sighed, giving up. "My father would kill me," she answered in all seriousness. "I had to get away from him. Safe Haven is the only place where I can be safe." She had repeated that statement many times over the past few years. "Is that enough?"

He studied her face for a few moments and then nodded. "Congratulations, Miss Jennifer Sweet. You are now granted access to Safe Haven, and admittance to the Queller Training Academy."

"But I don't understand," Jennifer protested. "I thought I needed to sign something and a board would have to approve me."

"Yes and yes. You do need to sign, and the board does need to approve you." He got up from his stool. "However, I am Elder Jabeth, and I have great standing with the board. If I recommend you, you are as good as accepted. Now come. Are those all of your belongings?"

"All that I have."

"Then let us go down to Safe Haven."

"You're Elder Jabeth, as in the Elder Jabeth who negotiated the Treaty of Dabani?"

 

"Yes, Jennifer," Jabeth affirmed, inclining his head. "Yes."

"Wow! That's amazing!"

"It isn't amazing if you know what you're doing." They walked out of the room and to the heavily guarded transport bay. Elder Jabeth presented his authorization, and together they boarded a transport heading for the planet below.

"What's it like?" Jennifer asked as they watched Safe Haven loom larger and larger in the view screen.

"It's a pretty planet, Jen. You'll like it."

 

"What town are we going to?"

"Adala. Don't worry. I'll take care of everything." And true to his word, he did.

 

 



© 2008 Karyn Knight


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I really liked the prolouge. You are setting up the character of Jennifer, and you make it so I automatically care what's happening to her. You introduce new terms without force feeding it. I don't know what's going on yet, but I don't feel completely lost either.
I like the concept of the story as well. It's very interesting and reminds me of one I'm working on. I'm definitely going to read more! I think it was a very solid intro.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is very cool. I'll read more.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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