All the flowers bend in the wind

I walked through the garden gate
Along the uneven stoney path
Passed the roses looking so great
Until Mother nature hisses her wrath

All the flowers bend in the wind
With deep roots so strong
As strong as my broken heart within
I feel her wrath as I sing my song

I sing so loud, all around can hear
My soul's storm blows within
So loud Mother nature would fear
This wrath I no long carry, for it's a sin

Reviews

[Ana B.]

a powerful poem. Beautiful and with the final impact.Great work!

[Eve Ola]

an enchanting start that grabs me in. and you relate broken heart with nature, its brilliant. Well done here

[Wandering Minstrel]

Great use of imagery and creative phrasing.

[Blake Fodor]

A charming write-I enjoyed this!

[Anne Timmins]

The rhythm is smooth, the tone very gentle and the message is clear and full of beauty and inspiration.

[John Anderson]

A unique and beautifully expressed poem. Amazing work

[K Scott Smith]

The piece is direct and concise and leaves the reader understanding

[Kelly Scheppers]

"all the flowers bend in the wind"
...such a philosophical feel to this, yet it reminds us how strong our inner being really is!

My best,
Kelly

[Mary Bosworth]

I am very impressed. This flows wonderfully ,and is so profound.

[Matching Socks]

Wonderful feeling in this one Susan.