The Moon

Riding in silence
windows down
tunes tuned out for the evening
mind tuned into believing
that the air I breath
is all I need
for just a moment
I didn't own it
it owned me...
and the muscles tense
from what has happened since...
finally let go
loosened my grip on the steering wheel
I didn't know
that I had become so uptight
and don't correct me if I'm right
but the moon is the most beautiful friend that I know
and it's with me wherever I go

Reviews

[Robert Strzalko]

I love the moon too. It's good that it's with us wherever we go, good ending.

[Ashira Macy]

She really does just follow us around faithfully doesn't she? Except one night a month when she prefers to be alone. Lovely.

[Eve Ola]

Moon, a truthful friend. Its beautiful Susan

[Wandering Minstrel]

This is a fantastic piece of poetry, full of feeling, vivid language and gentle flow. It makes a reader feel incredible

[John Anderson]

What a unique and thought-provoking poem. Great diction and flow help to make this an excellent poem. Well done!

[Kelly Scheppers]

This is extraordinary, Susan...always such a pleasure to read you!

[Mary Bosworth]

I love this whole message.

[Matching Socks]

Gosh, this is so beautiful, hint of melancholy with a dose of hope.
Very moving.

[Patrick]

you write everything so beautifully. This is no exception