What Goes Around, Comes Around

Not in any pain
I pray
no, not in pain
very much ok.
no love lost, no love found
all the same as always
what goes around, comes around
Seems an echo sound.
Howlin' hound houndin' for a sad heart beat pound.
No pain, no vain, feet on the ground.

Reviews

[Ana B.]

you painted strong emotions. love it, and glad that i stopped by.

[Ashira Macy]

Sometimes it feels like we can barely hang on, but we have to keep our feet planted on the ground, as you said. Well written.

[Anne Timmins]

well crafted and direct, nice write

[Eve Ola]

I can relate this piece . Thanks for sharing Susan

[Gabrielle Songe]

Like: Makes me wonder from where the pain arises.

[Me]

This is an awesome and creative piece filled with heart

[Niloufer Sultan]

I like the way it was portrayed with just a few words. Amazing!

[Wandering Minstrel]

You are an excellent poet with your very own unique style.. This is very enjoyable

[John Anderson]

In your amazingly intriguing words.. You are really shedding a light onto the reader to help us delve deeper as we try to understand ..

[Blake Fodor]

Very intriguing and the flow of it is perfection.. This piece has a certain longing and sadness to it that touches my heart