....Aur Me

....Aur Me

A Poem by Surya

dil me surila baazi baj raha tha jab
raat mujse kuch kahaani bata rahi thi
aur ye hawa maa ki tarah meri
zindagi mujhe waapis de rahi thi
me toh amir nahi hu ye sab ke saath
par kya hai inme kuch chupa hai
joh mujhe bi pata nahi, par
har pal kabibi ye mulaaqat hota hai
toh dil se paani chut tha hai
dheri andhera me kuch roshni nazar aata hai
kehnekeliye hai kya mere paas, bus
jeenekeliye meri duniya,
kuch pyaar, 
aur me.

© 2018 Surya


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The emotions... Really well written.. and that's my favourite thing about it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Anjali....:)
Anjali

6 Years Ago

You're welcome!
This needs a bit correction in changing the words.
Dil mein surili baazi baj rahi thi jab
Har pal kabhi bhi ye mulaqaat hoti hai
Your pondered deep within yourself and came up with such heart touching lines. I liked it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you....And shall edit them...:)
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome ☺
lol,can we get that siffered please

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Sure, after translation...

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Surya
Surya

Hyderabad, India



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