Colors...

Life lies in sacks of hay
Just to breath a grain and
Spread the smile to live on;
Ellipsed, tangled and sourced
To refine as a memory

Life anew gives a bliss
Adds color to rejuvenating smile
That's how it goes on
With wings to fly and
Silence to live

Though, feathers talk light
Beak breaks a shout with
A twisted tongue to sweep a life
And a bond to create
between a mother and life

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful and true words shared my dear friend.
"Life anew gives a bliss
Adds color to rejuvenating smile
That's how it goes on
With wings to fly and
Silence to live
I loved the complete poem. Above lines are amazing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Anjali]

Nice one.... I liked it..

[Surya]

Thank you, Anjali....sorry for being late...::))

[Anjali]

Ohh it's ok! You're welcome btw!

[Priyanshi]

Some lines are too beautiful from each stanza...like...
With wings to fly and
Silence to live ....
feathers talk light
Beak breaks a shout with ....
and the first two lines also....
beautifully written :))

[Surya]

Thank you, Priyanshi...:))

[wordman]

seems we always bounce back and our colors get brighter

[Surya]

Seems true..Thank you, Wordman...::)))

[barleygirl]

Another awesome day becuz I got a read request from you! *smile* I'm so glad you're writing & posting more lately! This poem reminds me of how being in a bad place (sack of hay) is only temporary & life will turn around. After getting thru a long difficult stretch, it seems life finally comes back in even more intense colors. I couldn't walk for about 5 years, then I got neck surgery & it took me 2 more years to learn to walk again. Now a simple little stroll outside feels like a million dollars every time, even tho my legs are still very painful & weak (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Surya]

That'show life goes, i guess. Thank you, Margie, sharing your words and experiences...(((hugs))))..

[Najam Us Saher]

Very descriptive. You made me feel your words.

[Surya]

Honoured at last...Thank you, Saher...:))

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome :)