Manzil hai tu mera...

Manzil hai tu mera...

A Poem by Surya

Jitna dhur tumse hona chahta hu
Utna mujhse hota nahi

Rutne ke baate dher saare karu
Ek kadam bi ut tha nahi

Manzil mera mila hai tujhme
Par sitaaron se safar hota nahi

Abi kya kahu tujhse shayad Wafa meri 
pesh karna lafzon se bi hota nahi

Chahe mujhse tum falak se bi dhur ho Par 
mujhe tumse ek qadam bi dhur hona hoga nahi..

© 2018 Surya


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Wow.... It gives a dreamy effect.. and so beautiful...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Haha, Thank you, Anjali...:)
Anjali

6 Years Ago

you're welcome!
Waah..kya khub likha h...
sab lines bahut khubsurat h....
:))

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Shukriya memsaab....:))
Mujhe tumse ek qadam bhi dur hona manzoor nahi.
Change the last line to this. It creates more effect. Very passionate and heart touching lines.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Will surely check on it......Thank you Najam...:)
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome ☺

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Surya
Surya

Hyderabad, India



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