Tangled Soul...

I feel we are still alive

In an ether world neither your's nor mine

It's so miraculous like a ray

Of my hope

It's an immortal elixir in your eyes

Which I got through your lips,

I feel life in our bond

for which I have no words

Just stay calm and look into my eyes

For I see a world of mine in your's

Let me tangle us and free our souls

For they fly to where love has no words

Reviews

[Ardra]

A world in which there is no need of words...
Will poets be welcome there I wonder... :)
Lovely poem..... love is to be felt in silence...lived in word...and to be whispered in times of chaos...

[Surya]

Haha, i'm sure....Thank you..:)

[wordman]

touching write,two people apart yet she feels
like the love is in another realm of her mind

[Surya]

Such it is...Thank you..:)

[Priyanshi]

this poem is different from the rest of your poems...
and it is so peaceful and beautiful lines .
:))

[Surya]

Haha...thank you dear...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure...:))