Sorry!!!

I know your pain,
I confess your tears,
I condemn m'self,
Trust me, I hate me.

My words aches you
But i have no other saviour,‎
My silence creates chaos, trust me
My heart aches a lot for you .

Just a matter of time for me
To be with you, holding you
In my arms, brave enough to
Ameliorate our state with bunch of sorries.

My mistake to grass a heart,
It's me to cry for worst,
But I wanted you to smile
Might be my cruel acts, but for 
Good cause.

Every minute in my diary 
I sketched you,
Every moment of my life
I love you.

I'm sorry for the loss,
I'm sorry for the despair,
But trust me I shall soon
Come to you and hug you
Just to admit mistakes 
And never to lose you.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I haven't seen much of you on this website & I've missed reading any new stuff from you lately! This is one of the best of yours that I've read so far. Sometimes your writing is a little too nuanced & I don't catch every idea you are sharing. But in this case, I catch everything loud & clear, so heartfelt, so expressive. I've done the most stupid things in life that caused a loved one to be gone from my life & your poem shows how this can feel, beating oneself up for making such a mistake. Very powerful! (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Thoughts In Time
Sorry closed the gap between oceans and allows the heart to be true to itself- sometimes we are our worst best enemy- to be able to say sorry is a huge achievement and a humble blessing putting pride at bay...🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

actually love DOES mean having to say your sorry....and wanting to say it ....to be that aware of another's feelings...
powerful words here, Surya.
j.

[Surya]

Thank you, J.

[May]

Really deep and well done. I loved it

[Surya]

Thank you May..:)

[Priyanshi]

It was a heart touching poem....
a kind of apology....and the lines are too beautiful...
Keep on writing,Surya:))

[Surya]

Thank you dear..:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure:))

[Najam Us Saher]

Heartfelt words with honest tone of apology. Good to read your work after a long time.

[Surya]

Thank you Saher..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

A real life poem shared my friend Surya.
"My words aches you
But i have no other saviour,‎
My silence creates chaos, trust me
My heart aches a lot for you "
We learn lessons and if we are lucky. Can return. I understand the above lines. Thank you for sharing the amazing words and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you, John.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Surya.