Bella'e Of Flower...

Like a blossomed red
It was so pure,
That smile of lillies
Led my heart to adore.

Was so brave to fight a bear
To win a thread for her
For those occult eyes to
Glow a rain of tender flights.

Nothing was mine till her
Then the rest of my world
Was bestowed by her just with
A spark in her lurking eyes!

Reviews

[Satvika : )]

Love the poem... It was really beautiful! Especially the "Was so brave to fight a bear, to win a thread for her." part. :)

[Surya]

Thank you..:)

[barleygirl]

First of all, I haven't seen much of you on this website lately & I missed reading you. I'm glad you read requested me. This is one of the best of yours that I've read. Your word-crafting is highly unique & full of surprising imagery that seems perfect after I get over the jolt of seeing words put together in the fresh ways that you do it. This really has flow & feeling (((HUGS))) fondly Margie

[Pravir]

Brilliant work Surya...
Very well crafted piece..
Choice of words is really soothing to ears...
Loved to read..

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem shared my friend. Gentle, worthwhile words made the reader believe and see eyes. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Priyanshi]

the middle stanza is brilliant.
The whole poem is beautiful to read.
Keep on writing.:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice to read positive poems about love...and that will to feel it with all our hearts---regardless of what comes back to us.

[Anjali]

I loved the first stanza... Feels so eternal... The story you've shown here through this poem is really nice! I loved it.

[Najam Us Saher]

You made me feel the warmth and passion. Beautifully written with delicate usage of words.