Sailor...

A sailor am on those

blushy waters

A sailor am on the

hopes of heaven

Mighty soldier on lustrous waters

Hugging those wavy dolphins 

Waving a bye to the golden stars

Dreaming light on the woody mars.

Sorted and spotted a raging shark

On my spine it clinged a spark

Not a hunter in this fiery dark

Managed to slide at my mark.

A dewy morning off my wheel

Anchored the ship on an isle

Had some rum and some crum

And some creepy lizards on my drum.

Waving to surise

Hugging the nights

On these waters

Having fights.

This is my life on these waters

touching the whales and scorching tales, 

P***y Octopus on my page 

while thunders blowing in rage.

A sailor am on these

Blushy waters

A sailor am rejoicing

The life of heaven

Reviews

[ROXANE DORSEY]

very very nicely written and thanks for sharing.

[Anjali]

Liked your creativity and imagination. It's quite a adventurous read, I think, cuz it's about being a sailor and all the pros and cons of it. I loved it.

[pragya gaur]

Great work.... Loved this piece... Thanks for sharing

[Sandipta$]

U r in lv with d Sea... Grt...m loving it

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the flow of thoughts and the feel of the sea. The sea can bring joy to the people who love her. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Bala Gorthi]

You painted a sailor who is totally in love with everything about the sea.. Wish you a smooth sail..
Thank you for sharing this nice craft..

[Surya]

Thank you for your kind visit Bala...:)

[Priyanshi]

A sailor am on these blushy waters...wow.
great work.

[Surya]

Ohhh...Thank you so much Priyanshi...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure

[Abraham George]

brilliant work my friend. keep writing.

[Surya]

Thank you dear friend...:)

[wordman]

a sailors life on the shore or on the sea,never a dull moment for a sailor like me

[Surya]

It' son both...Thank you wordman...:)

[Hope]

This is really great Surya:)
Loved the the way you penned the whole thing.
The choice of words is great.
And the poem holds many meanings.
This is by far, for me, your greatest work.

[Surya]

Hope it does hold, haha...Thank so much Neetha...:)

[Hope]

Pleasure......:)