Ijazat Baarish Mein...

Aag bi na buje is baarish me

Mera pyaar bi mara nahi mein marne pe

Ijazat hai kahi is wafa me jaha

Bewafa bi kahe zuban me jaan hi nahi

Andha hu mein par bekasoori teri baate khoob hi dikhi

Gazab hai tera dil bi barsaat bi aag ki hui mujhpe

Nikamma nahi shamma bane hai hum

Joh jalti jaa rahi hai meri zinda fatiha pe

Baat ab kya karu mein nikle hi na

Dil bi kyu dikhau tujhe, kuch raaz toh nahi

bus teri hi jaan hai isme..

Reviews

[Sandipta$]

Bewasi dard Ka aalam.... De do mujhe, Apne saare ghum....

[Dhiraj Dubey]

a poem that reminds me of my love is the one you wrote... good job

[Surya]

Haha...Thank you...:)

[Priyanshi]

"Baat ab kya karu mein nikle hi na
Dil bi kyu dikhau tujhe, kuch raaz toh nahi
bus teri hi jaan hai isme.."...Superb lines...wow...an amazing poem you wrote.

[Surya]

Even I like them...Thank u so much Priyanshi...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Najam Us Saher]

Very deep....Expressed true and heart touching feelings..

[Surya]

Thank you Saher...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺

[Wajiha Nayeem]

ohho....masha Allah....beautifully written...keep it up.
the lines were expressed reallyy nicely and there was a tinge of unsaid feelings...keep going surya..and be active on yourquote.

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you dear...:)