Journey Of Life..

Journey of life 
When seeped deep
In heart blossoms a
Generous smile from 
A feeling unknown

When lessons engraved
And feelings graved
Paves a way to celestial life
Worth of billion butterflies and
The Scorched emotions which
was once a fad of humanity...

When a soup of charisma
Dries and dies, oceans 
Of tears rained and flown
Starts a journey which was
Once known but now unknown
Leading to a cave of my own.

Reviews

[Priyanshi]

I agree with Abraham's words...very beautiful lines mentioned in the poem.
I loved this poem, Surya.
Keep on writing such great works.

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you so much Priyanshi....am glad you liked it...:)

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure.

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure.

[Abraham George]

really your pen is a magic pen . because you do magic with your words.

[Surya]

Hahaha, Thank you my dear friend, am delighted with your words...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Wonderful...I liked the flow and rhythm of this poem. This poem highlighted life's journey in a very pleasing way. I liked that.

[Surya]

Thank you so much...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You are most welcome. ☺