Mermaid On Moon

Just a Paint

Chasing the gazing moon
Hidden in infinite trees
On my wheels, I bid an
Adieu to the hopping deer

Seen a phantom shedding 
Blood from Blue eyes,
Had a reckless ride till
My nerves cried.
Stopped at a lustrous vision
Where a lump of emeralds
Floating on dark black waters
Guarded by mermaids
With  radiant pink eyes.

Moon I found next to my  vision
Pleased mermaids with an ode
Of romance, granted am to pass on.
A van of swan driven by a half man 
To those stars I waved a bye.
Landed on moon, sat on my throne
Half man at service and mermaid 
In my lap.

Opened my eyes and 
Giggled at my sense
After painting a dream I seen...

Reviews

[Abraham George]

beautiful dream you painted with words instead of brush.

Loved it

[Surya]

Thank you so much friend...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Quite a journey my friend.
"Landed on moon, sat on my throne
Half man at service and mermaid
In my lap. "
I do like the above lines. Good to be on the moon with a mermaid. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Yeah it feels good till it bites, haha...Thank you John...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this one my friend and you are welcome.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I think dreams are where we can freely exceed our limits ;) This is a wonderfully painted dream! I loved the imagery you created, Surya. Well penned.

[Surya]

Thank you Yumna :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome 😊

[heartspeaks]

wow ! the last line made me feel bad though haha! cause it looked so beautiful indeed . like a parallel universe. truly a great work not just in feel but amazing words used for poetry. Keep it up. Well done

[Surya]

Thank you so much for your kind visit and words friend...:)

[heartspeaks]

my pleasure

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh what hues of life we can paint in our dreams...and then that HD reality when we waken...and wish sleep was real life and we could nod off to real life.

[Surya]

Haha, positive....it feels good...Thank you J.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

Ah...crazzy imagery and the picture was in my mind showing up...pretty wonderful....and the poetry was AMAZINGG!!

[Surya]

Haha,Thank you dear...:)

[emmajoy]

' Moon I found next to my vision ~ Pleased mermaids with an ode ~ Of romance .. '

What a dream you've painted for your readers... a fantasy of sorts and gentle but clearly displayed.
Many thank yous for sharing such colours.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Emma..:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Your words made me to imagine what mentioned in this poetry and believe me i have a strong imagination.. so what i mean to say is this is outstanding..

[Surya]

Thank you so much Farhan....:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. Utterly beautiful imagination. I truly liked this. You painted an image with your words. Thank you so much for sharing.

[Surya]

Thank you so much for your kind words...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

No need to thank me. ☺

[Priyanshi]

Hey, wonderful dream, portrayed in beautiful words.
Very well written, dear.

[Surya]

Haha, Its just a fiction I conveyed in a form of story not any dream, Thank you so much Priyanshi...:)

[Priyanshi]

Okay, My pleasure.