Dil Tera Nahi...

baali pe baita tha soch raha tha aur

sanjeedgi zindagi ka gaana gaatha raha

maalum nahi tha ki aap aaraha h  mujhe pata chala toh 

kya hoga bus aap ki is mehfil mein farishta bi manzoor h

shikaayat kya karu mein aapse baate na nikle mujhse

rangreza saza ki kahaani kya sune  hum bi gulaam bangaye

sudarta nahi ye zindagi mera par karu kya mein

duniya bi gazab h mante nahi mujhe...

Darwaaaza toh kul jaata h apna ghar ka par kaha woh 

mera nahi, dil bi naadan h kul jaate h par tera nahi

Reviews

[Anjali]

Such a beautiful poem! The emotions, I can feel them... An amazing poem!

[Sofia]

Beautiful poem! Liked it..nd enjoyed reading this..:)

[Sandipta$]

Hindi n thoda odiya mix.... Nice combination.... U Mr. Tiinu

[Surya]

Hahaha...Thank you Sandipta$..:)

[Priyanshi]

Wah, bahut bahut achi poem..
You always write brilliantly.I really enjoyed this poem,

[Surya]

Thank you so much Priyanshi...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[pragya gaur]

awEsome as always ... Wonderful

[Surya]

Thank you so much Pragya...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

very nice...beautifully written..i loved it.

[Surya]

Thank youso much dear...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Waah. Nice thoughts. Really a very good write.

[Surya]

Thank you Saher...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺