Silent Love In An Unknown Street

Loved your streets where you

Walked on wearing a gown

Loved those nights where

I kept staring at your 

Beautiful eyes...

That's a rainy hour in a memory

Of mine where you standing under

A hay roof of a velvet night

Epitome of my heart raised it's beats

Love glued in me at your

Blossoming serene smile

Hidden wings of mine

Flew around in an unknown land

City of our's reminded my 

Romantic streets,

Where you and me in a planet of love

Crackling now in our olden days

Your lovely smile reminded all again...

Reviews

[Mr.Writer]

A dreamy, beautiful and sweet piece Surya!
Well done, keep it up! :)

[Surya]

Thank you Shaan...:)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[Anjali]

Such a romantic and beautiful piece! I liked it, and loved the imagination in this. You really know how to describe Deep things with such simple words. Loved it!

[Surya]

Haha, That's sure for a compliment to me...Thanks a lot ANjali...:)

[Anjali]

You are very welcome!

[Najam Us Saher]

I could picture this poem. It was heart touching. Good choice of words.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Saher...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thats so good to read..i love to read romantic poetry specially in urdu/hindi, no doubt that your urdu poetries are awesome and this one is just amazing..wonderful

[Surya]

Thank you so much Farhan...That means to me...:)