Silent Love In An Unknown Street

Loved your streets where you

Walked on wearing a gown

Loved those nights where

I kept staring at your 

Beautiful eyes...

That's a rainy hour in a memory

Of mine where you standing under

A hay roof of a velvet night

Epitome of my heart raised it's beats

Love glued in me at your

Blossoming serene smile

Hidden wings of mine

Flew around in an unknown land

City of our's reminded my 

Romantic streets,

Where you and me in a planet of love

Crackling now in our olden days

Your lovely smile reminded all again...

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Graceful expressions of the lovely things remembered from an old far-away time . . . I very much know the feeling, as many of my poems are about memories from a younger time! *smile* You always pick fresh & original ways to say the things that come from our everyday similar experiences.

[Sandipta$]

Love ur poem.... Silent love... R u missing ur old days....???

[Surya]

Am a teen though, poem is just a fiction...thank you Sandipta for your kind visit and words...:)

[Sandipta$]

Ta kain smti lekhicha, n pic b deicha emti... Kmti jaanibi

[Surya]

Hahaha...I donno much odia...I got it as, u were confused with lines in poem and pic i uploaded as my profile pic...is it?

[Sandipta$]

Hn.. Gd.. From ur poem.. I thought u r missing ur old days... N from ur pic... I didn't think that u r a teen

[Surya]

But am...yes, a teen...:)

[Sandipta$]

It's ok.... 😊

[Hope]

I esp adore the fourth stanza.
Also the title is quite catchy.
Really sorry for the delay in reviewing.
Thanks for sharing:)

[Surya]

Pls don't mention that...Thank you so much Neetha for your kind visit and words...am glad for them...:)

[Great Aunt Astri]

You captured the concept beautifully with your evocative words. Yes, love has that all pervading, never ending quality. It is wonderful to be reminded of that 'planet of love' when getting old and 'crackling'. We should all keep making 'lovely smiles'. Thank you for this fiction poem.

[Surya]

Thank you so much for your warm visit ad your time R&R...:)

[pragya gaur]

awEsome one surya ji...I love the way you express your feelings

[Surya]

Thank you Pragya...well It's just fiction romance...:)

[Priyanshi]

A lovely poem, dear. So beautifully written it.
I really loved it.

[Surya]

Thank you for your kind visit and words..am glad you loved it...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle and worthwhile words shared my dear friend.
"Love glued in me at your
Blossoming serene smile
Hidden wings of mine
Flew around in an unknown land"
I liked the complete poem. The above lines stood out to me. Memories and seconds of life. Things needed and never forgotten. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Indeed, yes...Thank you John...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Sofia]

Beautiful! Loved how the words of the first stanza kept decreasing..Nd it truly looked lovely to me. Such a nice flow it has got..it's really very beautiful..filled with a lovely description :)

[Surya]

Thank you Sofia...:)

[Abraham George]

i wanna walk through that street after i read your poem.
its so romantic and beautiful
great work my dear friend

[Surya]

Just go for it, haha...Thank you so much friend..:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the streets of this town are filled with magic...

serene images, love keeps the city safe...at least so it feels safe...
nicely done.

[Surya]

Haha...yeah atleast it pretends...Thank you J.