Silent Love In An Unknown Street

Silent Love In An Unknown Street

A Poem by Surya

Loved your streets where you
Walked on wearing a gown
Loved those nights where
I kept staring at your 
Beautiful eyes...

That's a rainy hour in a memory
Of mine where you standing under
A hay roof of a velvet night
Epitome of my heart raised it's beats

Love glued in me at your
Blossoming serene smile
Hidden wings of mine
Flew around in an unknown land

City of our's reminded my 
Romantic streets,
Where you and me in a planet of love
Crackling now in our olden days
Your lovely smile reminded all again...

© 2017 Surya


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Graceful expressions of the lovely things remembered from an old far-away time . . . I very much know the feeling, as many of my poems are about memories from a younger time! *smile* You always pick fresh & original ways to say the things that come from our everyday similar experiences.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love ur poem.... Silent love... R u missing ur old days....???

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sandipta$

7 Years Ago

Hn.. Gd.. From ur poem.. I thought u r missing ur old days... N from ur pic... I didn't think that u.. read more
Surya

7 Years Ago

But am...yes, a teen...:)
Sandipta$

7 Years Ago

It's ok.... 😊
I esp adore the fourth stanza.
Also the title is quite catchy.
Really sorry for the delay in reviewing.
Thanks for sharing:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Pls don't mention that...Thank you so much Neetha for your kind visit and words...am glad for them.... read more
You captured the concept beautifully with your evocative words. Yes, love has that all pervading, never ending quality. It is wonderful to be reminded of that 'planet of love' when getting old and 'crackling'. We should all keep making 'lovely smiles'. Thank you for this fiction poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your warm visit ad your time R&R...:)
awEsome one surya ji...I love the way you express your feelings

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thank you Pragya...well It's just fiction romance...:)
A lovely poem, dear. So beautifully written it.
I really loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind visit and words..am glad you loved it...:)
Priyanshi

7 Years Ago

My pleasure.
Gentle and worthwhile words shared my dear friend.
"Love glued in me at your
Blossoming serene smile
Hidden wings of mine
Flew around in an unknown land"
I liked the complete poem. The above lines stood out to me. Memories and seconds of life. Things needed and never forgotten. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Indeed, yes...Thank you John...:)
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Beautiful! Loved how the words of the first stanza kept decreasing..Nd it truly looked lovely to me. Such a nice flow it has got..it's really very beautiful..filled with a lovely description :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thank you Sofia...:)
i wanna walk through that street after i read your poem.
its so romantic and beautiful
great work my dear friend

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Just go for it, haha...Thank you so much friend..:)
the streets of this town are filled with magic...

serene images, love keeps the city safe...at least so it feels safe...
nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Haha...yeah atleast it pretends...Thank you J.

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