Dreamy Queen...

Mellidious song turned my mind

Swirling smile took my breath

Benevolent soul grasped mine

Where my eyes drowned in her glittery eyes..

Like a princess in a lilly crown

Moony shades on her dreamy gown

Speculating eyes all around

My heart dancing in her in and around..

Dancing in greeny garden

Covered by a murky sky

A flow of ocean beaneath our feet

Dreamy romance in my dream

Gypsy soul at your service

Lack of emotions for my urging heart

Hugged her tight in heavens of night

Mending our hearts together forever...

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such an uplifting piece...to read about romance mingling with the murky sky...and the speculations as to whether the relationship can work or not...despite odds, sometimes they do last forever.
nicely done.
j.

[Surya]

Sometimes they do...Thank You J..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked the flow and rhythm of this poem. Also very good choice of words. Well done.

[Surya]

Thank you Saher....am glad you liked it...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You are most welcome :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

You write so much and that's really good for a writer and all of your works are more than very good..btw very good work

[Surya]

Haha...Thank you Farhan...:)

[Anjali]

It's really creative and I liked it. I think you've tried to put up a dream world kinda like that. And it's really well portrayed!

[Surya]

Thank you so much..:)

[Anjali]

You are very welcome!

[Abraham George]

i wish this never end. love to read more. please continue this poem a little more

[Surya]

Haha...sure I will try..Thank you for your kind visit..:)

[Priyanshi]

This poem shows your happiness somewhere....
really so beautifully you have penned it. The lines are so so good.I really loved it, Surya.

[Surya]

Haha....Thank you so much....am glad for your visit and words...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, friend.