Adieu To Poet's Swords...

swords--Emotions..

Elite heart with caravan of words

A soul reflecting mighty swords

Journey from dried woods

to perplexion of caravan books

Hearty words left unsaid

drops of tears left wounded

A piece of paper had fallen

in a poetic soul of a land unseen

Destiny driven grandeur of life

Poetic beauty filled a soul

Swords as words stabbed a heart

many emotions postered applauds

Clinch of thirst to rhyme a word

Made a man from mad to kill a sword

Insane voice turned to sane in words

Driven apart from asylum full of swords..

Reviews

[duff]

I really enjoyed this one Surya. The title is great and you've got some sick lines here. Smooth operating my friend. Nice work

[Surya]

Thank you so much Duff...am glad you enjoyed...:)

[duff]

You're very welcome my friend:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

One of the best reads of today..awesome

[Surya]

Haha...Thank you so much Farhan...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

The feel of Dryden in your words.
Hearty words left unsaid
drops of tears left wounded
"A piece of paper had fallen
in a poetic soul of a land unseen
Hearty words left unsaid drops of tears left wounded A piece of paper had fallen in a poetic soul of a land unseen"
Dryden questioned often. Was his writing worthwhile. It was. I enjoyed the complete poem and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote

[Surya]

Haha...Thank you so much John..:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear friend.

[Sofia]

Wow!! This is really amazing...I liked it...it's so nicely written..

[Surya]

Aww!! thank you so much Sofia...:)

[Sofia]

most welcome :)

[pia]

this was wonderfully written. loved it !!

[Surya]

Thank you tons....Am glad for your visit Pia...:)

[emmajoy]

' Elite heart with caravan of words ' has me thinking of ancient caravans carrying only the finest silks and spices...

Words can both hurt and love - be friend, be enemy. Seems you've found the way to lay them as they should be laid. Fine writing from your heart and mind, Surya.

[Surya]

ohh, That means to me...Well it seems so...Thank you so much Emma...:)

[emmajoy]

You're very welcome.. :)

[Anjali]

It's really good! I liked it, a lot! I loved the theme of the poem.
"Swords as words stabbed a heart"
My favorite lines. It's beautiful!

[Surya]

Thank you so much for your kind visit and time reading reading it...am glad you liked ...:)

[Anjali]

No problem!

[Priyanshi]

"Hearty words left unsaid
drops of tears left wounded
A piece of paper had fallen
in a poetic soul of a land unseen..."
My fav lines...beautiful poem, Surya.
Keep on writing.

[Surya]

Mine too...Thank you so much Priyanshi, glad you liked it...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.