Adieu To Poet's Swords...

swords--Emotions..

Elite heart with caravan of words

A soul reflecting mighty swords

Journey from dried woods

to perplexion of caravan books

Hearty words left unsaid

drops of tears left wounded

A piece of paper had fallen

in a poetic soul of a land unseen

Destiny driven grandeur of life

Poetic beauty filled a soul

Swords as words stabbed a heart

many emotions postered applauds

Clinch of thirst to rhyme a word

Made a man from mad to kill a sword

Insane voice turned to sane in words

Driven apart from asylum full of swords..

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Good comparison of all the ways words can be like a weapon or feel like stabbing. Some poets are particularly ensconced in the heartbreak aspects of life, so I find myself not really wanting to go there as a reader, but sometimes it's irresistible, the draw of the heartbroken poets.

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

Your words are surely mightier than the sword sir, perfectly penned...

[Surya]

Thank you so much sir...am delighted...:)

[L.C. Jarrette]

=>you already had me at the first two lines.
"Elite heart with caravan of words
A soul reflecting mighty swords"
what a powerful write.

[Surya]

Thank you for your kind visit and words...:)

[L.C. Jarrette]

always a pleasure to read other writer's great work

[pragya gaur]

"Swords as words stabbed a heart many emotions postered applauds" I loved these lines a lot...as usual awesome one surya Ji

[Surya]

Thank you so much Pragya for your kind visit and words.....am glad you liked it...:)

[apennylate]

Destiny driven grandeur of life... Hah... An assaulting post of metaphors galore... Damn good ones I might add... Excellently penned...

[Surya]

You did added actually......Thank you Silente for your kind words...:)

[apennylate]

My pleasure, friend...

[Hope]

This is really interesting and powerful Surya:)
Also, this is very innovative work.
Thanks for sharing this!!

[Surya]

Thank you for your kind visit and words Neetha..am glad you enjoyed it...:)

[wordman]

touching write,the sword and the paper,weapons of a poet

[Surya]

Haha, They are....Thank you Wordman..:)

[Tony Jordan]

I like how you opened and closed this piece Surya.
It's an intense piece. Lots of swashbuckling metaphors and what seems to be a temporary resolution to the speaker's woes. Immersive writing.

[Surya]

Thank you Tony for your kind visit and words...am glad you liked it...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

What a great use of alliteration. Loved it. I liked what you did with words here. Words have profound thoughts.

[Surya]

Thank you for your words Saher....am glad you liked it...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome. ☺

[Poetic Beauty]

This reminds me of someone reading different books going on a new adventure and it sparks an interest in writing poetry.

I'm sure this piece and a deeper more personal meaning but those are my thoughts.

[Surya]

Yeah it has....Thank you for your kind visit and words...am glad for them..:)