Badlaav mili nahi...

Aaya tho tha is jagah pe, badle bahut is baar

ek mein hi tha joh puraana naksha baaki sab naya rang

puchu kyu ki badle tum, mujhe kya hoga teri badlaaav pe

par lagta h kabhi ki puraana hi teek tha woh zamaana

Khair aaj ye naya zamaana sikke baat raha h, mere log h kush inse

par mujhe pyaar baatne mein mili thi hasi joh aaj mein koh gaya

Kya kahu is tanhaayi soz ka joh mili beed mein

kab aaye ye log dil pe apna ghar banane

kab badle ye samajh apni roop, kab mein bhaitu

Us chat pe jaha naani kahaani sunaati thi mujhe 

Koh gaya us din mein aur ye insaaniyat, ab bacha kya hai

woh kapde, woh sikke, woh ghar...

mujhe kushi nahi mili inse, begum gayi baad me

dost bi kum hai, aur gum se dost hui hai

Koshish kiya tha samjaane ka saatiyon ko

par darr gaya mein kahi woh mujhe na badle

mein teek hu is khoob tanhaayi mein

par afsons is baat ki hai ki mein kuch nahi kar sakha

Lekin dil kehta h mera jaan leneka

unse joh apno ko badal diya

Zara sochu mein bi badle koun,

hai toh apna hi hai lekin dimaag kam

joh mere bi badal gaya..

Ab mein kahu kya in logon se

teek toh yehi hai ki bhaitu aur dekhu 

kaha chalega ye log apni naadaan sa mann chodke...

Reviews

[Anjali]

So damn good! The message you are trying to send and the way you sent it, it's amazing!

[pragya gaur]

It's just awEsome surya ji it's all I can say

[Surya]

Thank you Pragya for your kind visit and words...:)

[Priyanshi]

Beautiful work as Wajiha said....Really loved it.

[Surya]

Thank you ..am glad you loved it...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

another beautiful work from you....very well done su..keep writing.

[Surya]

Hey!!...Thank you dear...I will..:)

[Mr.Writer]

An emotional, engaging write Surya...
A change is always worth a try :)
Well done, keep it up!

[Surya]

Thank you Shaan...:)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem Najam! :)

[Sofia]

I liked it...It was nicely written. A good job!

[Surya]

Thank you Sofia...:)

[Sofia]

My pleasure!

[Najam Us Saher]

Deep thoughts and the way you haved weaved every sentence is very nicely done.

[Surya]

Thank you Saher....:)

[Surya]

Thank you Saher....:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.☺

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good use of words surya..you're really getting better in Urdu/hindi..
Very good write
"Koshish kiya tha samjaane ka saatiyon kopar darr gaya mein kahi woh mujhe na badlemein teek hu is khoob tanhaayi meinpar afsons is baat ki hai ki mein kuch nahi kar sakha"
Awesome lines

[Surya]

You noticing it...Thank you Farhan...:)