Dard Laash ki...

Kisse kahu ye dard mera, kabi kum naa hue ye gham

Kahu bi kya, kuch nazm naa aaye ye dard ka

Jeeyun bi kya, jaaon bi kaha

ye tanha mann kho taana diya mout ka

Par woh bi sahi kaha, Baar baar mulaqaat ho rahi h unse..

Banjaara ruh ko qaidkhane mein kya daala

Koh gaye ye jeena par koya nahi woh pyaar joh tumse hua tha..

Chalu bi kaha is nadi mein par rukhu bi kyu..

Azaadi mann ab bane bheemari jung uns ka

Ladun bi kya maut bi haazir hai ye ishq mein

Ab tu bi kya puche is laash se, zubaan toh mili mitti me

Par hawa bi kahe ye ishq, ishq hi tha...Ye aadmi sacha tha..

Reviews

[Anjali]

All I can say is... Beautiful! Good job. Keep writing.

[Priyanshi]

What you have expressed in the poem, i can really feel it...always stay stronger ...
a lovely work and heart touching too.

[Surya]

Yes i will .....Ye waise hi likha tha, sort of fiction....Thank you so much Priyanshi as you felt it...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[ashish hajagulkar]

good poem that tells us feelings importances

[Surya]

It seems so....Thank you Ashish for your kind visit and words....:)

[writ rajat]

Hai to ye mast............

[Surya]

Ohh...Thank you Rajat for your kind visit and words...:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

Really sad and touching... Beautifully written

[Surya]

You did felt then,....Thank you Abhishek for your kind visit and your time R&R...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

wah wah wah...lovely write.

[Surya]

Shukriya....Thank you dear for your words...am glad for them...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

pleasure su.

[Sofia]

Kya khoob likha hai! I just loved​ it. It was truly amazing. Keep writing :)

[Surya]

Thank you so much Sofia...AM glad for your words...:)

[Sofia]

My pleasure!

[Najam Us Saher]

Waah...I feel this is the best of yours so far. Deep and thoughtful. I truly liked it.

[Surya]

Is it so...Thank you so much...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺