Dard-e-dil...

kabi jaanta nahi tha pyaar kya cheez hai

hastha tha logon pe joh kahe unhe bi pyaar hogaya

palat gaya zindagi meri, ghar aaya tha tumahaara

ilaaj kya kiya tune, mujhe bi pyaar hogaya

Ab majboori hai woh manhoos chehra dekne ka

Ye kambaqt to yahi hai

par woh kahi aur ghoom raha hai..

silsilaate hue jee raha tha, kabi saath diya ab root gaya

par ye kambaqt to yahi baita hai intezaar me

ab lagta hai mujhe bi pyaar hogaya

Par kya kare ye dard e dil ka maseeha tumse ho nahi sakta

Reviews

[Pravir]

A heart felt poem by an amazing writer . . . bhut sarahniya prayas . . . . thori tukbandi ar v khubsurat ho skti ti . . . qk apse mujhe isse jyada ki umeed ti .. . . par koi ni . . Jo batein dil se niklti unka tuk bnane ka jrurat ni hota . . . wah khud hi ek sangeet hota h . . . bhut achhee . . . lage rho sayar saab

[Surya]

Thank you so much Pravir...and I try rhyming next time...Am glad for your visit....:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

waah...greatly written..amazing write.

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you so much Dear....:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

pleasure.......always.

[pragya gaur]

I have no words to describe your wonderful work surya Ji...coz I can feel that pain....it was awesome...

[Surya]

Thank you Pragya for your kind visit and words...:)

[Sofia]

Yeah, Ur works are always so wonderful as Priyanshi Di mentioned...it's always a pleasure to read Ur works..keep writing..it was very nyc..

[Surya]

Thank youu soooo much Sofia...Am delighted wih your words...:)

[Sofia]

My pleasure :)

[Priyanshi]

Really, you deserve appreciation for your work..It's also excellent...I always love your poem, Surya, keep on writing.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Priyanshi,....am glad by your words....:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure,, friend.