Am Blind...

Fed up in these colors,

They change everyday

behaving base of a day and

Breaking the wall other day...

Better am blind, so

I couldn't see them

even if they break...

How kind am to forgive them.

Evil behind the smile

To change person and kill everyday

Better am blind

I couldn't see them...

Better am blind I speak with heart

and I have no brain that scams a bag

Blessed am blind, I have no eyes

To see these superficial selfish creatures...

Graceful am to lose my vision which

gifted to create a world of my own colors..

Gifted am, these colors of mine

have no knife but a smile to cheer...

Blessed am, Am blind having no eyes

Proud am, I have a heart....

Reviews

[CAPOLAVORO]

There are always some good things despite the struggle. Being blind also has some positive gains out from it. You did say it well in this poem.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Capolavoro...:)

[Throughpaincomesbeauty]

I LOVE this! Totally relate. Please review my writings, I am new and have never really done poetry but would love your honest opinion. Xoxo.

[Surya]

Thank you for your kind visit and words...Yeah sure I will pass my opinion soon...whenever am free...Thank you...:)

[Sofia]

Wow! It's so true. An optimistic poem as you even took out something positive in being blind. Truly, this was genius. A good job indeed!

[Surya]

Aww!..Thank you so much Sofia..:)

[Sofia]

Pleasure is all mine :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

"Evil behind the smile to change person and kill everyday better am blindI couldn't see them..."
Awesome lines i mentioned above..very good job

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan...:)

[wordman]

but it gets harder and harder not to see the reality
that is upon us

[Surya]

Yeah it is upto us...Thank you wordman...:)

[Anjali]

That's a really unique concept, and it's really appealing. I really really liked this one. It feels so true and like straight from the heart kind of thing, and I guess that's makes it special. This poem deserves a lot of attention, cuz its amazing! I think this one is your best piece, in my opinion. Keep it up!!

[Surya]

Thank you so much Anjali...:)

[Anjali]

You are welcome!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes perhaps going through life wielding a blind eye to the negative might be the best thing...what we don't see or acknowledge might not hurt us...i miss my youth when i was naive...i plunged forward without a care.

[Surya]

Sometimes it's better to flow....Thank you J.

[pragya gaur]

Amazing job surya ji as mr. Writer said...Heart touching ....Keep writing surya ji

[Surya]

Thanks a ton Pragya...:)

[pragya gaur]

My pleasure surya ji

[Mr.Writer]

Very true! The ones who have a clean, nice heart, technically have treasure basically...
Amazing job Surya, keep it up!

[Surya]

Thank you Shaan..:) and yeah they have treasures...:)

[Priyanshi]

Well done, friend...Wonderfully written.
Lucky are those who're blessed with a heart.
Thanks for sharing such beautiful poem.

[Surya]

They are lucky....
Thank you Priyanshi...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.