Am Blind...

Fed up in these colors,

They change everyday

behaving base of a day and

Breaking the wall other day...

Better am blind, so

I couldn't see them

even if they break...

How kind am to forgive them.

Evil behind the smile

To change person and kill everyday

Better am blind

I couldn't see them...

Better am blind I speak with heart

and I have no brain that scams a bag

Blessed am blind, I have no eyes

To see these superficial selfish creatures...

Graceful am to lose my vision which

gifted to create a world of my own colors..

Gifted am, these colors of mine

have no knife but a smile to cheer...

Blessed am, Am blind having no eyes

Proud am, I have a heart....

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I understand & agree with your sentiments, that sometimes it would be better to be blind. I like that you present this idea showing both sides, where we can be better people if we see with our hearts instead of our eyes. But also, it's gut-level honest to admit that sometimes it would be nice to be blind & not have to see the bad people of this world, the ones that are tough to love, & maybe without seeing what they do, we can love them anyway. Very thought-provoking & heart-touching.

[duff]

Poetic observation tapping into the profound. Beautifully done.

[apennylate]

Better to be blind to hate, than revel in distaste... Blessedly penned...

[Surya]

Yes I agree...Thank you Silente for your kind visit....AM glad for your time stopping by...:)

[apennylate]

Of course, my pleasure...

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear friend.
"Graceful am to lose my vision which
gifted to create a world of my own colors..
Gifted am, these colors of mine
have no knife but a smile to cheer...
Graceful am to lose my vision which gifted to create a world of my own colors.. Gifted am, these colors of mine have no knife but a smile to cheer..."
I liked the above lines and I agree with them. Thank you Surya for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you John...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Bala Gorthi]

What we see is quite painful these days so what you say is very apt, Surya. Delicately presented bitter feelings of the sensitive heart say a lot. Well done.

[Surya]

Yes it is our present day..Thank you for your kind visit Bala...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

wonderful.....
i loved it su.

[Surya]

Thank you so much dear...:)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Incredible poem and insight. Whether literal or figurative, a beautiful testament to inner emotional vision over outer sensory vision. "Better am blind I speak with heart"-poignant and so touching. "These colors of mine have no knife but a smile to cheer"- brave, strong, tender. " How kind am to forgive them" . Your poem brings me to tears. Love this!

[Surya]

Ohh...Thank you so much for your kind visit and words...I appreciate your visit..:)

[lakki]

It remains a wish, but what is the faisable solution?

[Surya]

Just being a human with humanity is a soluton.....Thank you so much...:)

[Hope]

"Blessed am, Am blind having no eyes
Proud am, I have a heart...."
These are great lines.
We can be more human if we aren't exposed to the blindness of seeing and hearing people.
You portrayed it well.
Great work Surya:)

[Surya]

That's true....Thank you Neetha...:)

[Nora]

There are many blinds can see better than the normal people just with their pure hearts. I believe in that the heart can see clearer than the eyes .
Great job dude 😃😃😊

[Surya]

Ohh...Cheers then...Thank you Nourhan...:)

[Nora]

My pleasure 😊