Naqsha lafzon ka...

Shiddat se chahta hu rahma teri ye dil pe

kya kare iztiraar hu tera justajoo mein..

lag raha hai, ye uns alfaazon mein hi chup jaati hai

Suna hu waadein teri par jaan naa dikhi kehne mein teri

Pehchana nahi jhut teri muskaan mein 

waqt aagaya qurban ka, hogaya mein fanaa...

Khoon behra hai lafzon mein

apni Kitaab hogaya fanaa ye ishq mein

Warna hum bi the kaam ke

Ab toh pyaar hogaya woh zubaan pe joh kabhi suna nahi

Log use kehte hai shayari, par mujhe laga ki 

Bhegum meri aagaya panno mein bus kabhi dhiki nahi,

lagta hai chupa diya maine use meri lafzon ki naqsha mein..

Reviews

[Wajiha Nayeem]

HABIBI....wonderfulll....simply amazing.

[Surya]

Hahaha...That made me smile...Thanks a ton dear one...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

always a pleasure.

[Sofia]

Nicely penned and a wonderful write. Keep it up :)

[Surya]

Thank you so much Sofia..:)

[Sofia]

You're welcome :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

bht acche surya ji... yuhi likhte raho... a very good one and keep it up

[Surya]

Zaroor...Thank you Abhishek...:)

[Priyanshi]

I agree with Najam words....
As always, you write so brilliantly....and I really loved it, Surya.
Keep on writing.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Priyanshi...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thoughtful lines...I liked the last stanza especially the line pyar ho gaya woh zubaan se jo kabhi suna nahi...
You made me believe that one can love the unseen...

[Surya]

haha, Thank you for that...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

"Khoon behra hai lafzon mein
apni Kitaab hogaya fanaa ye ishq mein
Warna hum bi the kaam ke"
Wonderful lines..beautiful poem..i didn't get the title..
Don't you think it should be
'naqsha lafzo ka' ? Besides poem is very good

[Surya]

I think 'Ka' goes perfect...I will change it ....
Thank you so much Farhan for yourkind visit and words....:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Pleasure 😉