Game Of Soul....

Unfavourable game with twists and turns

Loss and lost...studious soul without feathers

Game of desires took control, it's a 

Fairy tale of a destroyed soul...

Searched in loss, Travelled a lot

Met many who turned me a lot

Running till I lost in lot

Made a story of wanderlast soul from a lot..

Fortitude of life taught me a lot

Where greenery made my way

On trembling hills in magma of rain

Fighting till I reached a top

Tapped my feet and danced a lot

Cried and laughed, In the savage dark

I seen my soul which stayed alone.

Nothing is worth just ups and downs.

Am proud to announce, I learnt a lot....

Reviews

[Priyanshi]

This poem is different from the rest of your other poems and I really loved it. You really, very well ,penned the ups and downs of life....am happy reading this poem...Thank you for sharing so wonderful poem, Surya.

[Surya]

Thank you for such a wonderful review...Thank you So.much Priyanshi...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Anjali]

My favorite line, "it's a fairytale of a destroyed soul" .
Over all, I loved the poem.😊

[Surya]

Thank you So much Anjali...:)

[Anjali]

You're welcome!

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow......I loved the rhythm of this poem...It is so encouraging....This one is my most favourite ones from your work till now....Thank you for a good read...This poem speaks volumes...I loved the last line the most. It makes the readers feel sad for the ups and downs in the beginning but in the end they are happy along with you :)

[Surya]

Yeah it seems so....Thank you Saher..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.