Game Of Soul....

Unfavourable game with twists and turns

Loss and lost...studious soul without feathers

Game of desires took control, it's a 

Fairy tale of a destroyed soul...

Searched in loss, Travelled a lot

Met many who turned me a lot

Running till I lost in lot

Made a story of wanderlast soul from a lot..

Fortitude of life taught me a lot

Where greenery made my way

On trembling hills in magma of rain

Fighting till I reached a top

Tapped my feet and danced a lot

Cried and laughed, In the savage dark

I seen my soul which stayed alone.

Nothing is worth just ups and downs.

Am proud to announce, I learnt a lot....

Reviews

[Jes' Pi]

Sweet and dramatic. I like it.

[Surya]

Thank you So much Dear writer...:)

[wordman]

didn`t we all learn a lot

[Surya]

I can't promise about all, haha,...Thank you Wordman...:)

[duff]

By far my favorite piece of yours! You have some killer lines in here.
"On trembling hills in magma of rain"
Sick imagery.
"Loss and lost...studious soul without feathers"
Good stuff for sure.
Great work.

[Surya]

Ohh....Thank you for your kind visit and words...:)

[duff]

You're welcome my friend:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Good use of words and a very good message ..keep it up surya..

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan...:)

[Hope]

I agree Surya;)
Life teaches a lot.
Great choice of words. Wonderfully penned:)

[Surya]

Thank you so much Neetha..:)

[Mr.Writer]

"Am proud to announce, I learnt a lot...."
We learn from our mistakes and events that happen in our lives... very true!
You've provided beautiful imagery of the soul as well and overall, it was amazing!
Keep it up

[Surya]

Thank you so much Shaan..:)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like that the speaker lived kind of a hectic, jump in with both feet and without thinking kind of life, but at least learned from it...and can probably calm down and slow down---and enjoy the wisdom gained from the journey...i've lived much this way so can relate.

[Surya]

Oh...am glad to know that u could relate to it....Thank you J.

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and wise words shared dear Surya.
"Fortitude of life taught me a lot
Where greenery made my way
On trembling hills in magma of rain
Fighting till I reached a top"
I liked and understood the above lines. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you so much John...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Sofia]

Woahh!! This was truly amazing nd I loved it.. Excellent work...I liked the way u used a lot of lots in the second para...anyways it was very good 😊

[Surya]

Thank you So.much Sofia...am glad you liked it...:)

[Sofia]

My pleasure 😃

[Wajiha Nayeem]

the last line....am proud to announce,i learnt alot...i loved this line of your poem surya!...the whole poem is an amazing view of ups and downs in life and yes, these ups and downs have made you learn alot which is expressed in the last line.!!....perfectly perfect...keep writing!

[Surya]

I will dear...Thank you so much Sweetness...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

always a pleasure surya!