Pravaah mein.....

Badi khoobsarat hai ye khel jeene ki

khilone hai hum, khelna hi padega

Jeetne ya haarne keliye nahi,

Kushi baatne aur gham mitaane....

kabi baat karo raat se, taaron se

kabi khelo jaanvaron se,

Jaffi dalke kaho un jaadon se ki 

Hum saath saath hai....

Kabi guzaaro apna waqt pahadon se 

Beegho baarish mein, ghumo dil ke saath

milo anjaan logon se....

Tab kehna kuch seekhliya lekin abibi baaki hai...

kahaani badalte jaate hai...

nadi ki tarah behte rehna is khel mein

Pata nahi mout se dosti kab hoga lekin

pehle apna is jeevan ko banao apne rishtedaar

Joh kabi saath na chutey....

Kohish toh kiya tha...raaste mein dil tut gaya

Par rukha nahi tha, chal raha tha pravah mein

Tab laga ki tanha tanha sa log hai par mein nahi tha...

Bada maza aaraha hai in junglon mein joh sheher aur ghar mein nahi 

Reviews

[Abhishek Asthana]

that's really great to see that you are writing this kind of piece consist of hindi words... you are doing well... very nice one :)

[Surya]

Thank you Abhishek...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Filled with different emotions, swelling around the poem and enhancing it!
Very well done Surya!
Keep it up

[Surya]

Thank you so much Neetha for a sweet review....:)

[Mr.Writer]

Oh lol, it's Shaan :D
No problem :)

[Surya]

Ahh...Sorry Shaan, A mistake...Hope you don't mind...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Ah, no problem :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You are improving with your each work well done.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Saher, for that sweet news...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Sofia]

It's just perfect!! Especially bcoz you have used simple words which are easy to understand..I liked the first para a lot..thnx for sharing😃

[Surya]

I felt the same, haha...Thank you so much Sofia...:)

[Sofia]

Most welcome :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

terrific....great work su...

[Surya]

Haha...Thank you so much Sweetness...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

arre arre...pleasure.

[Priyanshi]

I've no words for to appreciate your poem... it's really so so so brilliant....all I can is that ,keep on writing..an amazing work.

[Surya]

Thannkkkkkuuuuuu So much Priyanshi...I truly have no words to show my Gratitude....Thanks alot...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.